lnr/Originals/Books/Notes.md

Names that definitely need changing:

• Vatican City

Names that maybe need changing for clarity:

• Syrus -- spelled so similar to Synan, maybe Cyrus?

Book of Synan

Chapter 1

• Interestingly, the Ideya are called 'Warp Marbles' in the original text.

Chapter 2

• Add better descriptions for Synan and Syrus and differentiate their looks.
• The monster that follows Synan, it would turn him into a monster if he turns back and sees him. Does this get used later in the story? Twilite is the monster's name.

Chapter 3

• The elemental barriers part needs some work.