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* Vatican City
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Names that maybe need changing for clarity:
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* Syrus -- spelled so similar to Synan, maybe Cyrus?
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# Book of Synan
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## Chapter 1
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* Interestingly, the Ideya are called 'Warp Marbles' in the original text.
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## Chapter 2
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* Add better descriptions for Synan and Syrus and differentiate their looks.
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* The monster that follows Synan, it would turn him into a monster if he turns back and sees him. Does this get used later in the story? Twilite is the monster's name.
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## Chapter 3
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* The elemental barriers part needs some work.
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