Names that definitely need changing:

* Vatican City

Names that maybe need changing for clarity:

* Syrus -- spelled so similar to Synan, maybe Cyrus?

# Book of Synan

## Chapter 1

* Interestingly, the Ideya are called 'Warp Marbles' in the original text.

## Chapter 2

* Add better descriptions for Synan and Syrus and differentiate their looks.
* The monster that follows Synan, it would turn him into a monster if he turns back and sees him. Does this get used later in the story? Twilite is the monster's name.

## Chapter 3

* The elemental barriers part needs some work.